和 小竹 一起学习吧——英文邮件
[i=s] 本帖最后由 无名小竹 于 2010-8-5 15:51 编辑 [/i]各位筒子,没什么事的时候,和小竹一起学习吧:lol
小竹很喜欢一句话——书非借不能读也:lol
学习的资料千千万,也许你的电脑里就有很多很多,但是多数时候我们只下载,只买,而不看。。。:L
那么,没什么事的时候,就过来和小竹一起学习吧,我们先学习写英文邮件:lol 吧,声明学习的资料来源于小竹的书或者网络,并非小竹原文编写。
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[/color][/size][font=宋体][/font] 2010年07月13日,雨
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今天我们学习的主题是“感谢咨询”
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中文正文:
亲爱的史密斯先生:
非常感谢您对我公司生产的 UL9982001 型号的加湿器的咨询。
您所需要的资料今天已经寄出了,请查收。如果您对敝公司产品还有任何问题,请直接拨打02-2666-1234 与客服部的李小姐联系。
再次感谢您的关注和支持。
HM公司 谨上
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英文正文
Dear Mr. Smith,
Thank you for your inquiry regarding the humidifiers UL9982001. The information you want has been sent to you today. Please kindly check.
If you have further questions about this product, please contact Miss Lee at our Service Department. Her direct number is 666-1234.
Thanks again for your attention and support.
Sincerely yours,
HM Corporation 谢谢小竹 请大家和小竹一起记住2个句型:
1、Thank you for your inquiry regarding 。。。为某人咨询某事而表示感谢。
这是较为正式的书面语。
也可以说,Thank you for asking about。。。/Thank you for your interest in。。。
inquiry n 咨询
regarding prep 关于,至于
2、Please kindly check 敬请查收
类似有Please find enclosed 请查收附件
eg.Please find enclosed my CV and a letter of recommendation from my school principal
附件包含我的简历和校长的介绍信,敬请查收。 提醒:
在我们给别人写邮件的时候,请不要忘记写主题(Subject),这样收件人可以知道你信的主要内容,并且,对于陌生的邮件,如果没有主题,一般人们不愿意打开,以免计算机中毒。
本例的主题:Subject: Thanks for inquiry
小竹以前经常忘记写主题,后来朋友提醒,才意识到这个问题,请大家注意这一点。
并且,记住,公事最好发邮件,因为邮件将来也是评价事情的根据(即证据),并且一般公司的邮件一旦发出会永久保存在公司盘里(即使你自己删掉),故发送邮件要慎重。 Dear Mr. Smith,
Thank much for your interest in our product (humidifiers UL9982001).
What you'd like to want had been sent out today and please kindly check.
Any further questions, please directly contact Ms. Lee of CSD(Customer Service Dept.) by phone no. 02-2666-1234.
Thanks for your attention and support.
Sincerely yours,
Whom stands for HM Corporation 看的头昏脑胀的,n久没碰过英语了 [b]回复 [url=http://bbs.foodmate.net/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=3571951&ptid=373268]6#[/url] [i]renxiaowei[/i] [/b]
谢谢你的陪伴
Thank much for your interest in our product (humidifiers UL9982001).
Thank much,这里应该是笔误啦吧
What you'd like to want had been sent out today and please kindly check.
you'd like to do sth想要做某事
want sth/to do sth想要/想要做某事
这里他们不该连在一起 :Q。。。。。。。。。。 hope you are not just copying studying materials. [b]回复 [url=http://bbs.foodmate.net/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=3572772&ptid=373268]9#[/url] [i]秋彤[/i] [/b]
Let's study together:victory: [b]回复 [url=http://bbs.foodmate.net/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=3573165&ptid=373268]10#[/url] [i]xbsff[/i] [/b]
I'll study English everyday,although sometimes I have no time to update the content,
:victory: 俺补充一个,关于pls kindly find sth. enclosed in,这个提法在很多老的书里出现,这个句型显得太那什么了,xxx is enclosed in就可以了。 [b]回复 [url=http://bbs.foodmate.net/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=3574023&ptid=373268]13#[/url] [i]charlieinchina[/i] [/b]
:lol 3Q。。。。:lol [b]回复 [url=http://bbs.foodmate.net/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=3574081&ptid=373268]14#[/url] [i]无名小竹[/i] [/b]
小竹加油哈,打造一个邮件精化帖 [b]回复 [url=http://bbs.foodmate.net/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=3572543&ptid=373268]8#[/url] [i]无名小竹[/i] [/b]
小竹,我想发表点个人愚见
关于what you'd like to want,在这里应该是一个名词性从句哦
所以个人觉得这样用,可以的 我一般都说
thanks for your cooperation . [b]回复 [url=http://bbs.foodmate.net/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=3574698&ptid=373268]16#[/url] [i]wyuqin2008[/i] [/b]
:lol是这样滴,我一般不把这两个词一起联用,所以看着别扭:lol,个人习惯吧
谢谢杰西卡:lol [i=s] 本帖最后由 无名小竹 于 2010-7-14 12:52 编辑 [/i]
2010年07月14日 晴
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今天的话题是“感谢关照”
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中文正文:
亲爱的玛丽:
写这封信是为了表达感谢之情。
在我参观贵国期间,多谢您的热情款待。这是我第一次在海外待两个月之久,开始还有些紧张。但是您把我当成自己家中的一员,让我感觉毫无拘束。
请代我向您的家人致上诚挚的问候及特别的感谢。
期待尽快收到您的来信。
献上最诚挚的问候,
凯萨琳
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英文正文:
[font=宋体][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman][size=3]Dear Mary,[/size][/font][/color][/font]
[color=#000000][font=Times New Roman][size=3][font=宋体]This is to express my [/font][font=E-F9X]appreciation[/font][font=宋体].[/font][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Times New Roman][size=3][font=宋体]I would like to thank you for your [/font][font=E-F9X]enthusiasm [/font][font=宋体]and [/font][font=E-F9X]hospitality [/font][font=宋体]during my visit to your [/font][font=E-F9X]country[/font][font=宋体]. It was my first [/font][font=E-F9X]experience [/font][font=宋体]staying overseas for two months, so I was a little nervous in the beginning. However, you treated me like a member of your family and [b]made me feel at home[/b].[/font][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Times New Roman][size=3][font=宋体][b]Please give my pure-hearted regards and [/b][/font][font=E-F9X]special [/font][font=宋体][b]thanks to your family.[/b][/font][/size][/font][/color]
[font=宋体][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman][size=3]I look forward to hearing from you again as soon as possible.[/size][/font][/color][/font]
[font=宋体][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman][size=3][/size][/font][/color][/font]
[font=宋体][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman][size=3]Kindest regards,[/size][/font][/color][/font]
[font=宋体][font=Times New Roman][size=3][color=#000000]Catharine[/color][/size][/font][/font] Subject:Thanks for Kindness and Hospitality
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1、made me feel at home
意思是“使某人感到自在,不拘束”,类似的用语“take it easy”“放松,别紧张”
2、Please give my pure-hearted regards and special thanks to your family.
请代我向您的家人致上诚挚的问候及特别的感谢。
Please give regards to..."向。。。转达我的问候"
如果关系亲密,可以用“Say hello to sb for me”
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appreciation 感激
enthusiasm 热情
hospitality 好客,殷勤
infinite 无限的;无穷的 :$以下是我以前写的一个感谢关照的邮件:$,说的太那啥了,请自备塑料袋,:$,错误地方请各位指正
Dear XX,
This is to express my appreciation.
I would like to express my thanks for your kind help and suggestion. It was my first experience staying overseas, so I was a little nervous in the beginning.However,you treated me like a member of your family and made me feel at home.I spent a wonderful vacation with you and your family.Please give my pure-hearted regards and special thanks to your family.
I hope you and your family will be able to visit me sometime,Thanks again from the bottom of my heart.
Truly yours,
XXX :lolcopy的力量,以下是朋友的回复
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Dear XXX,
You are most welcome. it is my responsibility to take care of you. But since now have family waiting for me, I was not able to spend much time after work with you....
you are young and intelligent, with bright future ahead. Just think well, work hard and grasp any opportunity when it comes. All the best to you.
keep in touch as well in future.
Best Regards
XX [b]回复 [url=http://bbs.foodmate.net/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=3574698&ptid=373268]16#[/url] [i]wyuqin2008[/i] [/b]
欢迎语法帝MM:hug::hug: [quote]以下是我以前写的一个感谢关照的邮件,说的太那啥了,请自备塑料袋,,错误地方请各位指正
Dear XX, ...
[size=2][color=#999999]无名小竹 发表于 2010-7-14 13:05[/color] [url=http://bbs.foodmate.net/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=3574912&ptid=373268][img]http://bbs.foodmate.net/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url][/size][/quote]
这个算私人邮件吧